Score: 1

"This is punk..."

submission: Zuxys's Revenge

date: October 25, 2008

Seriously, this isn't punk okay? It sounds more like techno. Either remove and resubmit it in techno or make a punk song that uses that thing called a guitar.

I said resubmit it but now that I think about it, don't. At least not without some improvement.

I'm not saying you're a bad artist, this song's just bad. but I'll tell you how to improve.

1. Lyrics- not every song needs lyrics but it definitly improves most songs.

2. Longer- That song was 17 seconds, good songs are at least 40 seconds with some exceptions.

If that was meant to be techno, it was okay but look at my above points.

If that was meant to be punk, that's just a waste of space. Punk needs the following:

Guitar
Bass
Drums
Vocals(sometimes)

I know I haven't got any audio submissions but take it from someone who likes punk.

Score: 10

"that song is epic"

submission: Truth or Dare

date: September 14, 2008

that song has to be one of the best on newgrounds,
nice job